Editing: How to Find and Use the Best Editor for Your Self-published Book

ALLi Partner member Richard Bradburn explains how to find and use an editor

Professional editor and ALLi partner member Richard Bradburn of www.editorial.ie shares his methodical process to help new indie authors find and use the best editor for their self-published books.

“My Book Needs Some Help – What Do I Do?”

In my editing inbox, a typical first-time enquiry from a novice author often runs along these lines:

“I’ve written a book. It’s 200,000 words long and taken me 10 years to write, on and off. I’ve sent it to agents but got no response, so I know it’s got some problems. Please quote me to edit it.”

What happens next? Writers who have had no experience with the publishing industry often don’t know what to expect. This post aims to demystify the course of events. Although the process might not be absolutely identical with all editors, it should be pretty close.

First, Look for Recommended Editors

Firstly, let’s roll back a stage. Have you done your homework? Always contact an editor who someone else can vouch for. That might be a professional organisation like the SfEP or ACES, or a writers’ resources group like ALLi (check out ALLi's latest Services Directory of Partner Members here), or a personal recommendation from someone you can trust. There are too many charlatans out there to run the risk of giving your money to someone who doesn’t know what they’re doing.

Having been given a name, you’re then looking for:

• a website
• a corporate email address (not [email protected], or you’ll get a yahoo of an editor)
• consistent social media and online profile (perhaps a blog, some evidence of testimonials)

Read their website or blog. They might mention particular genres that they work in, particular genres they avoid. They’ll have a style of communication, chatty and friendly, or aloof and distant, that may or may not appeal to you.

Send Your Enquiry

Satisfied that they look competent, they work in your genre and your language version, you send them your enquiry.

How quickly do they reply?

• Immediately? Hmmm. They could be very diligent, or they might just be sitting at the centre of a dusty web waiting for a fly.
• Not for weeks? Well, they’ve sent their message—you’re not that important to them, and that lack of interest will probably play out in your ensuing relationship. Some editors are just too busy to take on new clients—that’s no reflection on you.
• Somewhere in between? I think it’s courteous to answer all new enquiries within a couple of days, but editors are humans too, and sometimes they’re giving birth, or burying a parent, or accepting a Pulitzer on behalf of their famous client, so cut them some slack!

What’s their response to your enquiry?

• Thanks for your enquiry. I’ll edit your book for $500. Walk away. This “editor” is a chancer of the first order.
• Thanks for your enquiry. I’ll edit your book for $50. Walk away. This “editor” is a chancer of the second order. Just because they’re only stealing $50 and not $500 doesn’t make their crime any less heinous.

Any editor who knows what they’re doing will not be able to quote you a firm price on an edit without seeing at least a sample of the manuscript (MS).

Further, any editor who knows what they’re doing knows that there are all sorts of edits, all priced differently. A developmental edit takes much more time, and is therefore much more expensive, than a proofread, for example.

They can’t possibly know what your MS needs until they see it, and any smart editor knows that an author who comes to them saying their MS “just needs a proofread” isn’t necessarily the best judge.

The Ideal Response

The response you should be looking for is, “Send me your MS, and I’ll have a look.”

Another common worry among novice authors rears its head here: plagiarism. What if the editor steals your masterpiece and passes it off as their own? Well, again, if you’ve done your homework and got in touch with a reputable editor with a real business, this won’t happen.

The chances of plagiarism are vanishingly small.

You may eventually turn out to be the next JK Rowling or Dan Brown, but at the moment, you’re an unknown author with a debut MS that no-one has heard of. The idea that an editor with an established business is going to gamble their entire livelihood on the success of your book is an outlier. So, heart in mouth, you email a few chapters.

(A word of advice. If your MS contains content of an explicit nature, either violence, abuse, rape or other potentially triggering passages, it’s only courteous to tell the editor this in advance. Editors are humans too, don’t forget. Some don’t work with books which contain certain types of graphic content, and they won’t appreciate being blindsided.)

How to Deal with the Response

Now again, if three weeks go by and you’ve heard nothing, then this editor is implicitly telling you something. “I’m really busy. Your enquiry is not that important to me. Please hold.” If your heart is set on that particular editor (perhaps they come highly recommended?), you might be prepared to wait. If they respond immediately with a ten page dissertation on what they saw wrong with your first few chapters then… okay. That strikes me as a little needy, but maybe the dissertation is insightful and resonates with you.

Let’s assume you get a response from your chosen editor in a reasonable timeframe. What are they likely to say?

• “Your work is an abomination in the eyes of the Lord.” Well okay, time to just tiptoe quietly away.
• “Your work is good to go – it doesn’t need editing.” Unfortunately, that’s extremely unlikely, but if it does happen, thank your editor profusely.

It’s more likely to be somewhere in the middle:

• “Your first few chapters are good, but have some significant structural problems that really need sorting out. I’d recommend some developmental work on this.”
• “Your work is excellent. It does need a proofread, but otherwise should be good to go to agents.”

How to Agree a Price

When your chosen editor has told you what type of editing they think your book needs, they’ll give you a price.

Editors fall into two camps:

Some price by the word, others by the hour. Editors who price by the word like that method because it’s easy for authors to calculate their likely costs. There’s a significant problem with this however—it pays no heed to the fact that one MS will require a much larger amount of editorial intervention than another. If you’ve been diligent and spent weeks and months rewriting and revising, self-editing many drafts until you have a highly polished story, you should be rewarded for that effort. That reward takes the shape of reduced editing costs. It simply won’t take an editor as long to whip your MS into shape as it will an MS of identical length that’s a rough first draft on which the ink is still wet, therefore it shouldn’t cost as much.

Other editors charge by the hour. They know the rate at which they edit, in thousands of words per hour. They calculate the number of hours they will need to edit your MS and multiply that hour count by their hourly rate. Editors who work a lot with publishers tend to like this method—it’s the way the industry works.

As an editor, estimating your fee is an art, not a science, however. There’s guesswork involved. Quite often an editor will use a kind of hybrid method to arrive at a fee. Instead of quoting a flat rate per word, they’ll quote a range of rates per word, reflecting the difference in quality that they see across writing samples.

So how do you know, as a novice author, if the fee your editor has quoted you is reasonable?

Most professional editing organisations (of which your editor is a member, right?) publish rates guides. The EFA’s is here, that of the SfEP here, for example. Although by their nature they are only rough guides, they do give some guidance to authors as to whether the rate they’re being charged is reasonable.

The other alternative is to ask several editors for a quote. Editors do charge differently—they have different overheads, some are more experienced, some are only starting out, some have prestigious client lists and years of working with top publishers.

Ultimately it’s the author’s choice.

How to Use Sample Edits

And what about sample edits? You’ve got in touch with an editor. They’ve assessed your MS and given you a price. In spite of all their qualifications and experience, how do you know they’re going to be a good “fit” with you and your book?

It’s an intensely close relationship. An editor really does get inside your head when they’re critiquing your work. How do you know that you want them in there, poking about?

Look again at their website, Facebook groups they belong to, writing websites they may contribute to (or run).

• Some editors are rather prescriptive (“you should do it this way …”, “the rule is …”). You might like that approach. Having been struggling with a writing problem on your own, you may want to be told what to do.
• Others are very laissez-faire (“there are no rules …”, “rules are made to be broken …”). That more flexible approach might appeal, or it might feel as if perhaps the editor’s own grasp of the rules isn’t that strong.

An alternative method of finding out whether they would be a good fit is to ask for a sample edit. The editor “edits” a few pages of your submission and sends it back. You can see what they pick up (and what they miss!), how they couch their suggestions for changes (vague, or polite, or didactic), what their general communication style is like.

There’s one caveat with sample edits. If your book needs structural work it’s practically impossible to give a sample developmental edit, because by its nature such an edit looks at the book as a whole, and not at just a few pages.

You can then compare sample edits from the different editors and arrive at an informed opinion as to who is going to gel with your book and you.

(One minor point: Please don’t try and get your book edited for free by asking thirty different editors to edit thirty different chapters! It has been attempted, more times than you’d think, and always causes us editors, most of whom know each other online if not personally, enormous amusement.)

How to Time It Right

Finally, timescales. Some editors are booked up months in advance. If you’re happy to wait for the right editor, just join the queue. If you have a deadline, (a self-imposed publishing date, or perhaps a competition entry) some editors are able to be more flexible with their schedules and fit you in earlier.

OVER TO YOU Feel free to ask questions via the comments box – or to add your own top tips for finding and using an editor effectively for your self-published book.

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